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It wasn't bad, it looks like you have potential and if you created an actual movie with a story and characters I think you could make something great. Keep up the good work! Gave me a chuckle :)

That wasn't bad at all the idea was pretty funny and the animation and drawing was decent. It looks like you have potential to make something great just keep working. I really liked the writing above all, the joke was funny and well crafted. Keep up the good work!

CrispyToon responds:

Thanks BillyBob! Yeah, in retrospect I need to work on my pacing, thanks for the kind words!

Well it looks like you put a fair amount of effort into this which I admire. There was no sound and really no story other than a flash movie being uploaded. It looks like you have talent and the passion for flash, just add a compelling story and some characters I think you could do something great! Keep up the good work!

KurayamiShiryoku responds:

Thank You :)

Hmm...well on the plus side your drawing and animating is perfect. The joke was so-so in my opinion. It looks like you could make something fantastic if you just made something longer. Your graphics and animation look like they could be on TV. So in closing, looks like you have tremendous talent the only problem is the length. Keep up the good work!

I'll give you one star for effort and one star for the fact that the unexpected image of Ron Jeremy was hilarious. It looks like you put a lot of time in this which I admire. One minor quibble - you just need to allow more time for people to read the text. It seems like you have a lot of passion for flash and you probably have the ability to make something great on this site, just keep practicing!

thomwim responds:

Why, thank you. This is my first experience using Flash, which took me about a month to animate. Now that you mention it, some of the speech bubbles went by too fast.

Well it looks like you put some time into this so I will give you 2 stars. However, there was a lot of misspelled stuff and the music seemed like the wrong choice for this. I can see you have potential though. If you go to this website - http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-
free/ you can get some pretty good free music to download that work okay for flash. Just make sure you work on your spelling next time. All in all - good effort and hang in there, keep practicing you can only get better and better!!

I see lots of potential in this, just focus the movie a little more, editing out nonsense can make all the difference but you've got talent. Next time try a more dialouge related cartoon I'd be interested to see it, I bet it does over a 3.0.

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